Mr. Stewart basically told me that it's much too narrative (which I knew), and that it doesn't answer the question at all. I know everything I want to include in the essay now, I just haven't finished articulating it into the shape of an essay yet!
Tuesday, September 7, 2010
My first essay draft
I've been hesitant on scanning this because I realise that it's absolutely horrible and hardly even looks like an essay, very "blah".
Mr. Stewart basically told me that it's much too narrative (which I knew), and that it doesn't answer the question at all. I know everything I want to include in the essay now, I just haven't finished articulating it into the shape of an essay yet!
Mr. Stewart basically told me that it's much too narrative (which I knew), and that it doesn't answer the question at all. I know everything I want to include in the essay now, I just haven't finished articulating it into the shape of an essay yet!
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The inmportant thing at the moment is the final draft. How is it going?
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